sorry that this is so long just read over it and tell me who you want to be I have no preferance so just pic and then tell me who you want to do the voice for.

Fade in: ODSTs prepping or their mission.

SGT I:make sure that you have extra ammo and grenades. These are the covenants toughest troops they wont like being shot at.

LT R: sorry to interrupt sergeant but I have our guest for this drop.

SGT I; really and who might that b-- holeeeeeee a spartan.

In the back ground the Spartan grabs a BR off of a rack and checks the scope then puts it on his back and picks up a spartan then switches back to the BR.

LT R: Well if you ladies and gentleman are ready we leave in five.

SGT I : you herd him get to the hornets and mount up mount up!

shot of hornets flying into Valhalla and landing near the crashed pelecan.

LT R: go go go fan out look for survivors!

ODST 1:sir I found someone come look.

LT R runs over to the back side of the pelican and sees the wounded ODST sitting against the pelican.

ODST 1; sir you better hurry hes fading fast.

Wounded ODST: they came so many so fast we couldnt hold them *cough* cough* the LT ordered a retreat to the structure by the la- *cough* *cough* *cough* lake they might still be there took our wart hog left me and the other wounded for evac the evac hornets came shot down banshees.my wife I love h- h- hhhhhhhher.

LT R: damn we lost another get back on the hornets were going to that building.

camera at ground level as hornets land beside building at lake end of Valhalla

LT R: into the building lets go check your corners clear it out!

SGT I: sir the building is empty

LT R: good move in

ODST 1: hey LT we got some thing

LT R: what is it

ODST 1: Im not sure

Spartan: that is a class C37A biped teleporter.

ODST 2: that sounds painful

LT R: cut the lip.

SGT I: so uh who goes first?

ODST 1: not me

ODST 2: same here

ODST 3/4/5:Im not going /not me no way/oh hell no

LT R: what Im sure as hell not going first

SGT I: ditto

Spartan pushes past ODSTs and in to teleporter

LT R: look what you did.

ODST 1: us ?

ODST 2: we didnt do any thing sir.

SGT I: just go through the damn teleporter.

Camera sees SGT I come out of teleporter followed by LT R

SGT I :what is this place?

Spartan: teleportation hub

ODST 2: so witch one do we go through?

ODST 1: that one
(nods toward a teleporter with a bunch of blood around it.)

ODST 2: oh boy

SGT I: this could be bad

LT R: where did the Spartan go?

ODST 3: aw crap Ill go look for him

SGT I: Im coming to

LT R: okay you find him. The rest of the squad and I will figure out where these things go and where we are.

SGT I: okay understood.

Camera is following ODST 3 and SGT I

Survivor 2: (Weekly)(through radio) help please

SGT I:(into radio) who is this?

Survivor: (weekly) this is corporal James Dean of alpha squad who are you?

SGT I: I am sergeant Irene Maple of UNSC delta squad what is your ID number?

C JD: (weekly) 1-0-3-Q-E-S-F-R-0-0-5-M-N-D-R-E-0-7-0

SGT I: okay every thing checks out where are you?

C JD: I am at the *cough* top of the main grave lift.

SGT I: alright we are on our way.

ODST 3:(into radio) LT we have another survivor we are en-rout to retrieve.

LT R: roger that we have our location and are half way through the teleporter destinations.

ODST 3: good to hear sir.

SGT I: sir do we have our destination yet?

LT R: yes it is a desert planet called *static*what the hell is tha--*static*
SGT I : sir sir damn it we need to retrieve that survivor and get back to the squad.

Camera cuts to view of survivor

hiding behind a stack of crates when SGT I and ODST 3 enter through grav lift

C JD: oh good your here we need to get to your squad before he dose.

SGT I: who is he?

C JD: he is the one in charge of this area and will kill your squad if he finds them.

ODST 3 : is that him now?
(Looking at a monitor slowly floating towards them)

C JD:**** run.

SGT I: not with out you

C JD:Okay fine

camera sees the three jump out of the room and run up a ramp then down some halls and finally back int to the room with all of the teleporters and find most of the squad dead and the Spartan and LT R standing alone in the room.

Spartan: we need to leave now!

C JD: agreed through this one.
(steps into teleporter)

camera is beside teleporter as all 5 come out in the main room on sand trap
the bodies of alpha squad litter the floor

C JD:(looks around)damn their all dead
runs over to computer and squats down
J CD: so thats what it is

SGT I: what what is?

C JD:these two columns were a containment device to hold that robot that you saw earlier his name is--

Bias: Bias, Medicate Bias

C JD:damn he followed us here.

Bias: well actually I beat you here.Hmm hmm hemmmmm dee dooo dmmmm

C JD: you beat us?

Bias: Yes and I wish to help you defeat your enemies on
this. Because I failed miserably on the world 3-D200700987-M52-2 I believe you called this world Harvest.

Credits

Writers: Joseph Hayes/Kevin Haar
Actors/voice:
LT Richards------------
SGT Irene--------------
C James Dean--------
ODST 1-----------------
ODST 2-----------------
ODST 3-----------------
Bias----------------------
Survivor 1--------------

Camera-----------------Joseph Hayes

awesome!!! what character do you want to voice puppeteer?

Sounds pretty cool, albeit rough still (I'm assuming). I'll have to read it a couple more times though, to find out who I'd prefer to voice. But this sounds really cool either way. Why did I think it was meant as a comedy, again? Heh.

And are we still doing our little "skit" first? I'd highly prefer it.. it would be a good way to get the fans used to our voices before we get all "serious" on them with this series. Plus, it's quick and simple. On one map. In all likelihood it would only take 1-2 filming sessions.

We're talking about a quick little short here, just so you know. Ultimately it's your choice, but I'd prefer us do the skit first. I'm about 1/4 of the way done with the script. It will be done by Saturday evening (I know it sounds like that's a while off; but I have exams this week).

Thoughts?

gamertag: GrantixTechno
Heroic Map Pack: Yes

Um thanks for the HUGE enthusiasm and you can do Bias.But you do realize that the SGT is a girl?

yeah, especially when almost every one on the forum is a guy.
Okay so if every one could send me the lines for you characters that would be great.

P.S.I think that my email is privat so here it is zaberhayes@gmail.com

-- Edited by hellclown at 15:57, 2008-01-16

Go with the second one :).

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-- Edited by hellclown at 10:58, 2008-01-19

Silva, did I ever send you the script for mine??? I don't think it got out of my ideas notebook. I still can't remember what I did in Puerto Rico...

steve2frag wrote:

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Silva, did I ever send you the script for mine??? I don't think it got out of my ideas notebook. I still can't remember what I did in Puerto Rico...

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No, you didn't sadly.  That would definitely help though - to see what you had.

And I can't come to your party.  Grifball practice & editing the site.

uh Silva where is the script for the skit?